I'm cursed from the life of sorrow
Unspoken words unleashes through their voices
Voices that cannot be seen with my eyes
Conceive the last stand as cold as ice
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Wow, and that last line is great. Great images come to mind.
Beautiful poem and well constructed. I like the construction part of it. You managed to put so much emotions in different stanzas and in the end, you came up with a killer line. well done