Wednesday, July 16, 2008

Concealed Darkness Comments

Rating: 3.5

Consumed by midnight's darkness
A black candle flickers, the only light
Body, dimly accentuated
For a night of sinful delight
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Wendy Bureau
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Godfrey Morris 14 May 2012

So sensual, intersting and pleasing to the ear. Lovely poem

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Bob Gibson 15 May 2009

The act! the performance of two human beings, is extolled in implicit detail, romance is woven between the interfaces of two people who's boundaries are within each other, pure! unadulertated love!

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Bob Gibson 07 April 2009

Again you leave me breathless! i cannot conceal the passion within! a great write Wendy! truly Bob x

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Bob Blackwell 10 August 2008

This poems painting with words, you draw a very vivid picture- a black candle flickers at midnight, a wonderful description of how we can lose ourselves consumed with passion. Phew this is some write well done.

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Bob Gibson 17 July 2008

Phew! its hot in here! Pullleeeeeeze open that door! what can i say! fantastic poem Wendy!

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Sabrina Helphrey 16 July 2008

very intense poem alot of emotion can be seen great poem keep up the good work-Sabrina P.S. thanks for your comment on my poem

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