Consumed by midnight's darkness
A black candle flickers, the only light
Body, dimly accentuated
For a night of sinful delight
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The act! the performance of two human beings, is extolled in implicit detail, romance is woven between the interfaces of two people who's boundaries are within each other, pure! unadulertated love!
Again you leave me breathless! i cannot conceal the passion within! a great write Wendy! truly Bob x
This poems painting with words, you draw a very vivid picture- a black candle flickers at midnight, a wonderful description of how we can lose ourselves consumed with passion. Phew this is some write well done.
Phew! its hot in here! Pullleeeeeeze open that door! what can i say! fantastic poem Wendy!
very intense poem alot of emotion can be seen great poem keep up the good work-Sabrina P.S. thanks for your comment on my poem
So sensual, intersting and pleasing to the ear. Lovely poem