Friday, July 4, 2008

Concealed By Darkness Comments

Rating: 4.8

innocense shroeded in mysery after lifes misfortune.
concieled by chaos and misunderstanding.
let not our perverse mind cload that which is consumed.
let us be ruled by oppressive demanding.
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Kellykel Keller
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Margaret Atkinson 08 June 2009

ah_mazing drowning in emotion now added to my favorites list

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whoa..... that's deep... i like the raw emotions..... keep it up..

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Vampire Heart 13 October 2008

Very emotional, alot of feelings burst out from within the poem, lovely indeed

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