Friday, January 18, 2019

Conceal Comments

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Fake is the face
Which hides the pain
A smile it wears
To cover the tears
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Rini Shibu
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Anjandev Roy 30 January 2021

Wisely written....

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 January 2020

Giggles of sadness A tinch of madness No one can dig the concealed state.. fake and the real.. lovely contrasts you make in your poem.. tony

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Aqua Flower 03 February 2019

Fake conceals what is real! A excellent write about concealing sorrows!

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Ravinder Soni 18 January 2019

A nice little piece of thought, Rini; wonderfullly expressed.

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Kostas Lagos 18 January 2019

Covering of sorrows presented in such a fantastic poem!

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Lamar Cole 18 January 2019

This is a very good heartfelt poem about conceal.

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