Tuesday, May 22, 2007

Con Artist Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sensing with his third eye,
waiting to launch an ambush.
indulge the thoughts of the prey,
now this devilish creature is ready.
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Angelica Ortiz 29 June 2007

speak the truth. i love the way you written this. great writing.

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Melvina Germain 28 June 2007

there is so much of that going on these days, one must be careful. You describe this so well, another excellent write Marvin.--Melvina--

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Alison Cassidy 01 June 2007

Sounds like this one is from personal experience, Marvin. LIke your use of the expression 'third eye' and your last line 'en route to shattered dreams'. You're so right. Unscrupulous creatures like the one your describe can reduce innnocent victims to misery. A passionate piece of work. love, Allie xxxx

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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