Comradeship Comments

Wonderful lines there mate? A knight, a horse in long white garment, etc. I could imagined how comrade looks like on top of a black or white beast. Nice choice of words, lines flows smoothly and most of all each line gave a picture. I would say full of imagery. Well penned amigo! Thanks

Great poem, took me in the moment, had me there in spirit. God bless us all-MJG.

A keenly observed portrayal of your winsome threesome - a Don Quixote-Sancho Panzo pair perhaps? Your final stanza adds an air of etheric mystery to the poem, which tantalizes the reader. Great write. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Excellent narrative Deva - - flows onward so the reader has to walk along with the party of three - - then a surprising last line........ all very stylish - - 10 Fay..