Thursday, May 19, 2016

Computing My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Give me the password of your heart,
I shall enter your life and compute your thoughts,
Then scan your feelings.
Give me a chance to process your mind
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Pranayee Rachamalla
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Kishore Kumar Das 23 May 2016

Your love poem appears to be a software based on the mathematical formula.......hope it yields results...

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thank you for reading this poem sir! thank you for commenting too, ..this poem is actually a fictional one i wrote as a challenge when my friend asked me to write! but still thanks for your comment!

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Sriranji Aratisankar 19 May 2016

Excellent work Pranayee. funny and thoutful as well as poetic, full 10 for u.I request u to go through my poems

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thank you so much! so nice of you! thanks for reading as well as for commenting on my poem! , i'll read your poems for sure

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