Thursday, July 7, 2011

Computer Problems! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stupid computer, keeps locking up all the time,
Trying to submit a new poem, I hope it rhymes.
It stops here, it stops there,
deleting my unsaved documents, the annoyance, I can't bear.
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Mikayla Smith
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 07 July 2011

Great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. I really liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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Efate, Vanuatu
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