Compromise Comments
Racing down the Autobahn of spine
is the seed I nurtured with the sun of your smile
and the moist of the against the sun climb
the seed meant to become:
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This piece is different in technique and therefore valuable to me as I study it for what I might try. The conjoining of metaphors really creates an impression of deep insight dosn't it. And yet the poet has not become undigestable red meat. the slip through compromise, a bight in the tail that emphasised the thought nicely. keep writing
Clever penning - I like the imagery, really brings the story to life. HG: -) xx
Inveterating write, Rehan....Such meticulous detail, incorporated with resplendent imagework! Job Well Done, my friend! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
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8/7/2025 3:51:01 PM # 1.0.0
a poet jesting in style with the ideology of love...: -) ...lol..i like it.!