Saturday, June 14, 2008

Composition Comments

Rating: 4.3

You get masked by the lines sometimes
like bluish dye, in the shape of
a wolf’s rib, shot through frost
or that other tigress, fire, though
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Richard Bunch
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Indira Renganathan 12 September 2009

Very much intricate to me....though I feel a music in the flow of words....lovely

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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 October 2008

A nice poem. Love it. 10+

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Greenwolfe 1962 22 June 2008

If I said I knew what this writing was about, I'd be lieing. I never pretend to understand something I don't. My integrity means too much. So, I'll just say this. It is presented well in terms of form. It also is written quite well. This is all I can evaluate without further knowledge. GW62

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