Sunday, April 6, 2008

Composition 2a Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tinkling milliard of ions
In slow motion into my
Synapses canal that
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Roland Bastien
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Abha Sharma 11 May 2008

Your poem is alchemy of physics, chemistry with the biology of brain and thus provides us a complete Oasis where the electrons of consciousness, peace all fused together……. An intelligently composed piece…liked reading it.. **Abha**

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Subbaraman N V 07 April 2008

What a lovely write! Thanks.

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Tsira Goge 06 April 2008

It is fine symbiosis of microbiology and poetics, good work, Roland. Kindest regards, Tsira

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