Thursday, December 26, 2019

Composition Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are made equally of Reality
and Non-Reality. Sometimes I grasp
your meaning only in the whisper-speech
of dreams. Other times, in the clear light
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Daniel Brick
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Liza Sudina 12 January 2020

Beautiful philosophical poem, reminds probably of Hegel's Dialectics.

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Glen Kappy 29 December 2019

on first reading, daniel, " defiant happy ending" stands out to me. yes! i think. against skepticism, against despair, love had the last word. -glen

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 December 2019

A wonderfully crafted piece.... Rated 10+++

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Daniel Brick 27 December 2019

Thank you, Bernard, for pointing out the craft of my poem. When we write, we are often alone wrestling with words and meanings, but that's what poets are meant to do - to express some truth as powerfully as we can. To have this craft acknowledged by a reader is truly rewarding. THANKS MUCH

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 December 2019

The reflection of reality we can feel with beauty of hope and impact of nature. Justification is made as per perception. This poem is very nicely and beautifully penned with great dignity. An interesting sharing is done really.10

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