Wednesday, March 7, 2012

Complications Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her world softly, silently
Implodes, as the import of
The doctor's words, delivered in
Quietly apologetic tones, echoes
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Martin O'Neill
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Smoky Hoss 12 November 2012

A great strength of descriptive power is in these words.

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Sue S. 08 April 2012

I totally got this. The last line captures that awful falling into the void. An excellent poem.10.

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Dustin Newman 22 March 2012

Well written and emotional.

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Martin O'Neill

Martin O'Neill

Solihull, Birmingham, England
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