Wednesday, January 3, 2007

Complicated Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm not sure that you quite understood,
how hard it hit the rest of us...
We all felt deeply so undone,
We felt unraveled, uncollected...
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Barry Van Allen
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Con Nie 12 April 2007

Yes it is so hard to figure out why life is the way it is especially losing someone to an accident. Your poem is heartfelt. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Dee Daffodil 26 February 2007

I like this one Barry...it speaks from your heart. Very nice. Hugs, Dee

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