Wednesday, February 13, 2008

Complicate The Memories Comments

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Chronicles are the adversary tonight
Falling apart in between memories of delight
Such appetizing emotions come to mind
Filling up your heart with contentment
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Aiden Florence
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Lilly Mandrell 16 February 2008

I really like this. I like how you restated, but changed it. Its a really good poem.

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Casey Gauthier 14 February 2008

'What would it feel like tonight To complicate the love in sight' are my fave lines. I was excited as soon as I read the title too. yay for poem!

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