Saturday, February 25, 2023

Complex Love Comments

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My love like a subclause
Is put on hold
For no clause would join it
I am in search of a simple sentence
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Nosheen Irfan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 June 2023

Your love is a subordinate clause but you can't deny that it's a part of the main clause. Absolutely a wonderful poem.

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David Wood 02 June 2023

And there can be nothing more complicated than love!

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Pallavi Tripathi 02 June 2023

Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 June 2023

Bravo my friend and fellow poet Bravo!

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Anjandev Roy 02 June 2023

This is simply brilliant work......thanks for sharing.....

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 February 2023

Beautiful ink. Simple love is beautiful love. Thanks for sharing.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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