Alice Kriel

Alice Kriel

Douglas, South Africa; Currently in UK
Saturday, February 18, 2006

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Breathing fills me
I quiver
Waiting, aching
The fine strands of you
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Alice Kriel
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A. Michael Sears 28 February 2006

Garcon, bucket of ice-water, please? I love it. It reminds me a lot of Ulrike Gerbig, a friend of mine and fellow poet. You would do well to read her work. I was serious about the bucket thing... ams

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Sylvia Chidi 18 February 2006

Well a prisoner you shall be and utter in ecstasy. Nice poem, I hope the person you are writing it for feels the same.

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Alice Kriel

Alice Kriel

Douglas, South Africa; Currently in UK
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