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Describing your sweetheart so poetically and how you felt with her, telling of your deep love for her, then wondering where she's gone so soon from you, all combined makes a beautiful, but sad story of true love. Excellent poem, Amitava, you've outdone yourself again. RoseAnn

You are speaking directly to me here - an unknown someone whom you can know as if she resides in your heart but still she escapes your senses when you wake up. I am your dream sir, that elusive happiness that you long for, that which keeps your heart beating. I am poetry. Thank you for the inspiration and the expression. I am enamored, not disappointed.

Relationships can be very unsteady at times. Some days are familiar just like the sun that shines every day. Other days are unknown just like a lion that seems to sleep so peacefully and when awakened feels threatened. Never go for a ride on love unless you are good and ready! Nice poem.

The pain of an intimate relationship abruptly cut down ! ! Its intensity can be felt in every line! ! A moving write! !

A lovely deep emotional poem with feelings

Beautiful write with deep emotions of a wonderful relationship, but she has now gone and you don't know why!