Tuesday, November 10, 2009

**completely Ludicruous** Comments

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Completely ludicrous......

Mountain aquifer the source for us to feed
and we are the author of greed
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lily peace lago every by to ph
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Noel Horlanda 17 November 2009

I like the first stanza, it is with deep meaning and true in its sense. Cheers!

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Kranthi Pothineni 10 November 2009

Meaningful write. Few lines in this write are really composed well. Meaningful.

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Ranjit Ravindran 10 November 2009

'We are the author of greed'.... perfect description. A priceless message Ma'am.

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Eyan Desir 10 November 2009

The message was carried... out bold and eloquent.. Good job

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Priyanka Bhowmick 10 November 2009

a gud msg delivery... well written

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Raj Arumugam 10 November 2009

we need a world where we do not take sides but are objective and everyone in the world must have a fair deal...your poem delivers this message of objectivity and justice most eloquently...

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lily peace lago every by to ph

lily peace lago every by to ph

live in universe arakonam
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