Completely ludicrous......
Mountain aquifer the source for us to feed
and we are the author of greed
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Meaningful write. Few lines in this write are really composed well. Meaningful.
'We are the author of greed'.... perfect description. A priceless message Ma'am.
we need a world where we do not take sides but are objective and everyone in the world must have a fair deal...your poem delivers this message of objectivity and justice most eloquently...
I like the first stanza, it is with deep meaning and true in its sense. Cheers!