Wednesday, October 19, 2011

Completely Broken Comments

Rating: 5.0

shaking hands
so scared of whats happening
sick to the stomach
excruciating pain
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Captain Cur 19 May 2012

True. We can only put outselves together, but sometimes the pieces don't seem to fit. Strong poem.

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Jonny Brackney 25 January 2012

yes, this is good....

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Kara Towe 26 December 2011

Powerful! No body can fix anybody. I can't stand it when they try, like they know my pain, my life, my heart, my mind. I'm not a bug to examine, I'm not a numbered robot on a recall line. I hear you loud and clear, couldn't agree with you more. Rock on!

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Kimberly Picazo 26 October 2011

Very well written ^_^

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Dave Walker 26 October 2011

Like this. Really like your style of writing. Great write.

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