Monday, June 12, 2006

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Rating: 5.0

When you are here around
I found my way out of this maze
Things became so amazing
All I saw are the beauty of life
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Francesca Lam
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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 September 2008

A beautiful composition. The last line are nice.10++ 'My heart is found to be completed Only if you are around'

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R H 15 June 2006

The sense of love, loss and longing resounds. Lovely poem Francesca, Kind regards, Justine

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Francesca Lam

Francesca Lam

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