Sunday, August 2, 2009

(*complete Me* Comments

Rating: 2.9

Is it true
that away I'm pusing you
I'm honestly saying
I'm not trying to
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? ? ? ? 17 August 2009

this poem really amazing sweet and all great talent near perfection keep it up

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Sarwar Chowdhury 15 August 2009

Fine thought out! Clearly said facts. 10+

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Afzal Shauq 13 August 2009

want to make this work to never let you go I'll stop hiding my emotions The complete me I'll show perfect... its really a good poem as your poetry is.. I liked the idea and agree with..because there is only wya to be completed when the missing second half is suddenly happen to be and make you perfect... love the idea, wich is thoughful and great written in poetic and melodic way..10/10

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Cory Davis 12 August 2009

This sounds familiar. This poem really shows a struggle. Thanks for writing something so meaningful

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