Complete Happiness Comments

I love poems of the dawn, a real atmospheric treat. Andrew x

I try sometimes, honest! !

To look for peace in the quiet of the moment then find, is almost too much for the heart to bear, as it may have been some time sinse this joyous occasion took place A beautiful feeling in this one Ernestine You have told it so well Love Duncan X

A SLICE OF PARADISE ON EARTH, WHAT MORE CAN ASK FOR...WELL CRAFTED WORK...NICE SMOOTH FLUX W/RHYTHM & RHYME IN SYNC... ENJOYABLE PIECE''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

What a lovely way to start the day - even afternoon days! Question though: should the first stanza read Then your smile you must employ rather than Then your smile, you must employ? Just a thought. Love your writing. Scarlett

I will definitely give it a go Ernestine, but we must allow our emotions to flow equally, we can't hide them, just store them up. complete happiness is on my way...I will find it one day. Smiling at you, Tai

A wonderfully uplifting poem Ernestine - only wish I'd read it first thing this morning - might have had a better day! Warmest wishes, Justine

Ahhhhhhhh! Complete happiness....that sounds wonderful! Very lovely poem Ernestine! sincerely, Mary