Saturday, May 23, 2020

Complete Control Comments

Rating: 5.0

Complete control is what you most desire.
For mystery is no longer a friend.
You once marvelled at the sea's constant ebb and flow,
And the subtle changing of the seasons.
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Shaun Cronick 23 May 2020

Dominic very nicely written and imagined and beautifully displayed as always. And always with your poetry it is fresh and superbly original. 10++ and added to my fine favs. Take care sir. And I thank you for that more than fine earlier message and likewise for this original poem

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Dominic Windram 24 May 2020

I was thinking of some of my peers when composing this one. Growing up in the 1980s, in my experience, was very much dog eat dog. It was as though the 1960s never happened. I'm pleased that I survived the experience.

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