Complete Control Poem by DM W

Complete Control

Rating: 5.0


Complete control is what you most desire.
For mystery is no longer a friend.
You once marvelled at the sea's constant ebb and flow,
And the subtle changing of the seasons.
But now they mean nothing to you at all.
Or so you say, as your repeat the mantras
Of the cold, grey systems that you once despised.
Remember the times you basked in the glow
Of moonlight, as you poured out the secrets
Of your heart. That now seems such a long time
Ago. You've traded in your poetic
Visions for starker, prosaic solutions
Indeed, you have discarded all your dreams.

Saturday, May 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: control
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 23 May 2020

Dominic very nicely written and imagined and beautifully displayed as always. And always with your poetry it is fresh and superbly original. 10++ and added to my fine favs. Take care sir. And I thank you for that more than fine earlier message and likewise for this original poem

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Dominic Windram 24 May 2020

I was thinking of some of my peers when composing this one. Growing up in the 1980s, in my experience, was very much dog eat dog. It was as though the 1960s never happened. I'm pleased that I survived the experience.

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