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Lovely piece. Expressed so well. Full emotion of lifes heartache and hope.10/10

Dewald I enjoyed thus poem, the struggle in life ending with strength. Keep writing I will read more of your poems. Bob Blackwell RSA

I very much enjoyed this poem. And I loved the image of strength with which you ended it. Peace, L&T

Dewald- I count myself among your biggest fans and this poem is the perfect example of why. I feel like reading exceptional writing like this helps me to write better. -shannon

wow thts a gr8 poem i rely cn relate 2 what you say and you got loads o skill