Complaint Comments

usually PH does not allow the 'same comment' to be submitted twice! somehow they let me do it, though i only resent after it appeared to not have gone through as complete. ha ha ha....bri ;)

• (CONT.) • 3 - I’m thinking I don’t understand this as well as I’d like to, but I like reading the poem. Favorite lines: “Like a falling star In the dark bitter sky, or Like a tiny, lonely dew freezes at dawn” THE USE of “bond” puzzlesme. To MyPoemListl Bri

(CONT.) 2 - When you awaken in the morning's hush I am the swift uplifting rush Of quiet birds in circled flight. I am the soft stars that shine at night. Do not stand at my grave and cry I am not there. I did not die. (CONT.)

1 i too thought this different from (some) others you've written. it actually reminded me a bit of a poem shared recently with me, written by Mary Elizabeth Frye: Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep Do not stand at my grave and weep I am not there. I do not sleep. I am a thousand winds that blow. I am the diamond glints on snow. I am the sunlight on ripened grain. I am the gentle autumn rain. (CONT.)

1 i too thought this different from (some) others you've written. it actually reminded me a bit of a poem shared recently with me, written by Mary Elizabeth Frye: Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep Do not stand at my grave and weep I am not there. I do not sleep. I am a thousand winds that blow. I am the diamond glints on snow. I am the sunlight on ripened grain. I am the gentle autumn rain. (CONT.)

I'm speechless. what a beauty! something different from your other poems

Xelam, such a touching poem👍👍👍

Love bond immortal song all we need in life

A kinda posthumous writing for someone who loves you so much and when you are gone...