Monday, November 2, 2020

Competition Comments

Rating: 3.7

Everyone competes nowadays,
Birth to death, here it exists.
Parents make it sure always,
Purchase seats for their kids.
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Suresh Kumar EK
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Susan Williams 06 November 2020

your poem reveals you to be a wise educator- -if only we could get the parents to listen and lighten up instead of burdening their children.... top marks

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Akhtar Jawad 04 November 2020

We suffer from your crazy mutilation, You threw us into such a competition It's due to shortage of resources and over population., a thoughtful poem.

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M Asim Nehal 04 November 2020

It starts from the million sperms only one survives and that is how our life begins. This competition remains till we quietly reach our final resting place.... A thoughtful poem.10***

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Prasana Mp 02 November 2020

The deadly competition of modern world Is poetically painted here in this beautiful poem

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Varsha M 02 November 2020

Yes competition ruins. Even the best of best loses his self esteem. But a heathy competition motivates to be more better next time.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 02 November 2020

Thats true. Some kids are good with hands and not their hands. They shoild also be encouraged. Some are thicker but speakers. They also must be allowed to talk. We cant all be the same

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Suresh Kumar EK

Suresh Kumar EK

Kerala, India
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