Saturday, August 30, 2014

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He lies like a cucumber
In a orchard
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Geetha Jayakumar 01 September 2014

Fantastic lines..... He receives everything Whether we care for the fruit or not It will come to us when we deserve it….. Very few believe in this competitive world, no one wait for fruit to come to them, in fact they snatch it. fruits are benefited by someone who doesn't deserve to have it. Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.

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A laudable law of life is here eloquently expressed!

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Valsa George 31 August 2014

Empty vessels often make a lot of noice! But the silent quietly serve! In the end he is rewarded for his toil and sweat! A great write Deepak! But as Salini has said, I wonder if real merit is taken note of these days! People who make a show now a days conquer success!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 31 August 2014

therein lies the essence you captured so nicely.

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Salini Nair 31 August 2014

it will come to us when we deserve it….. nowadays i don't believe...but a general fact..............like it

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