Comparisons Of You And Me Comments

A poem of pang that the nest of bird of its own creation

nice one, its lovely comparison: -)

Asif, this is one poem of yours which makes me smiling til the very end of your lines. This is indeed very entertaining, dear Asif. You take your lines so lightly and with fun and yet they containdeep thoughts and unexpected revelation towards the end. This is smartly done. Keep on writing and posting.

Wonderful written poem. Nice comparisons.

another piece of art.i believe poetry must be the way of showing our loves our passions and.. the way that you always use to show, state your love. nice job brother~nb

Well done Asif, another good one...I've updated my profile, take a look, and added a new poem 'Where Is The Poem'. I appreciate your talent and hope that we can be friends Regards Ken

A nice combination of you and me. good write.

Hello Asif: -) This is sweet and easy to read. How refreshing! I saw your comments on the work of some of my fsvourite poets and thought I wouldpop by: -)

I liked you poem please email me and talk about your poem.