Saturday, April 16, 2016

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Don't be just another helpless soul,
A cog in a machine,
A useless piece in the puzzle of time,
I'll give you a moment away from your mind.
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Harrison Bishop
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Jazib Kamalvi 23 January 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Harrison. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 April 2016

Don't just be present, Transcend your full potential, You are allowed to grow and develop, Not lost in your own thoughts. An inspirational poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Norah Tunney 16 April 2016

Good poem encouraging us to move beyond, to live with passion.my biggest fear since my earliest years was to live a mediocre life and so far I have not.love the lines I'll give you a moment away from your mind and the the last two verses. This poem is a wake up call and a good reminder to Carpe Diem thanks Harrison

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