Tuesday, June 14, 2011

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Poor me
fatigued and exhausted
yet homecoming
make me
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Tribhawan Kaul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2017

Exhausted mind swallows life sometimes and we feel so sad. Home coming improves eagerness. Spider-webs decorating wall whispers about melody of the flies. Emptiness of mind we can fill with true wisdom. Brilliant expression is witnessed and powerful wording makes this special.10

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Tribhawan Kaul 16 October 2017

Thank you dear poet for visiting my page. Your comments on this poem of mine is an encouragement Happy reading and writing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 April 2016

House-lizard playing ball! Nice piece of work.

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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