Friday, January 3, 2003

Compact Dusk Comments

Rating: 2.6

Here at the height of the day night change
The color of the sky is uncertain,
The sky depending in which direction
One's eye strains, each of its swatches a strange
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Bill Knott
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Sue Ann Simar 02 August 2008

Compact Dusk, compact masterful language, too. 'I wonder if one tint/ ever survives the harm of seeming unique' - the word 'harm' and words: 'Posied-up portrait on our palette knife' 'Redundant as a stopsign in italic' a perfect last line: 'The face on which my profile leaves no print' I love the third stanza and the title.

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