Commuter Comments

A refined poetic imagination, Richard Theze. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

Well done Richard. I have to admit I was a little skeptical when I read the title (not sure why?) , but as I read through your words, I enjoyed the ride. The reference to the birds on wire was a clever comparison to the human commuters and I like many of your word choices: network, all-electric carriages, and Rich... The comparisons between past and present, technology and old-world, flow into the writing and the last stanza was a surprise. It wasn't the overdone idea of old is better than the new, but then an appreciation for progress and technology because it gives you time to enjoy the view and think (maybe write a poem?) . Thanks for sharing.

et, through the windows I observe The endurance of nature's tapestry - Rich, I have gained time To sit and stare..... i have gained time to sit and relax and get away from the stress of everyday life. thank you for this thought provoking poem. tony

Rising early! ! Nice work.