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I feel the need to get down on my knees and repent my sins
God's ear was to the land and I know he heard me
Sneaking around in the dark as I planned to part
My remaining hair with a hollow point shell loaded with despair....
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One word, Ted: Amazing! You've captured the human drama, IMO, precisely. I love the logic in your art. You're rational - even when portraying pain...a time when humans are least rational. This is a stunning piece. Thanks for sharing.
Compelling and ever so human... A terrific write with an eye-catching title...
This drew me in like a smoky jazz bar. Wonderful. Hugs Anna xxx
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8/25/2025 3:51:17 PM # 1.0.0
Damn Ted that was great!