Friday, June 29, 2018

Communism Comments

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I observe and I ask why?
Always silently,
and I watch silence of the sky,
then I speak loudly.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 June 2018

Magnificent write. A brilliant satire on communism. A great expose to the inefficient government agency in charge of implementing the labor laws. Loved reading this great poem. I liked how the Poet formulate his brilliant thoughts.10++++++

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Kelly Kurt 29 June 2018

The concept of communism is at least somewhat valid. The practice is almost always abused by the powers that be.

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Red Soul 29 June 2018

This is a story true all around the world. The working class is always the one without a voice. A fine poem Mr Jawad. Thanks for sharing...

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 June 2018

My pen was filled in with blood, on the white paper of the nature, my heart in pain and eyes in flood... such a fine poem........ i too understand it my dear Akhtar the reasons of the spreading of communism........... thank u very much for this poem. tony

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 June 2018

A wonderful write! Thanks for sharing dear sir...10

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Robert Murray Smith 29 June 2018

An interesting write. ++10

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