Wednesday, July 25, 2018

Communion That No Mortal Hands Receive Comments

Rating: 5.0

Within these brooks that scent the tender eve
perfect themes of night unheard or seen
she waits upon the starlight and the breeze
that place between wakefulness and dream.
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Irfanulla Shariff 25 July 2018

A mystical poem full of vivid imagery, remarkably crafted. Thanks for sharing, Captain.

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Captain Cur 25 July 2018

Irfanulla, Thank you for your encouraging comment.

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Rini shibu 25 July 2018

Interesting write.. Cursed always to repeat her lovers word. Wish to read more about it

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Captain Cur 25 July 2018

Thank you Rini. Glad you asked, I will be publishing more poems in this series. It gives me something to write about. Gods, muses and nymphs they can never get to much press.

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Savita Tyagi 25 July 2018

Beautiful poem. Thanks for explaining the mythology. I was wondering how to connect the last two lines with rest of the poem which itself has a mystical effect. Now it all makes sense.

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Captain Cur 25 July 2018

Thank you Savita. The Greeks even have legends about how an echo was created.

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Robert Murray Smith 25 July 2018

An imaginative write.++10- - - - - - - - - - - -

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Captain Cur 25 July 2018

Robert, as always thanks for taking the time to read and leaving a comment. They are highly appreciated.

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