Sunday, July 24, 2005

Communion Comments

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He holds me like a prayer,
As though he's seen
The consecrated promise
Of all I ever hope to be,
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Pamela Davison
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Poetry Hound 24 July 2005

Though I don't think much of communion, I liked this poem. Very nice flow and depth. Only minor criticism is that the last stanza is a bit cumbersome, perhaps because there are too many adjectives. But a very tight poem.

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