Tuesday, August 1, 2006

Communicative Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Having adorned them with words before
I flung my pen to the sorority of clouds
and stood beneath for a repay in verse.
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Pradeep Dhavakumar
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Sue Ann Simar 29 May 2008

I'd change the last line to 'perhaps asking me to write on her plight'. I like the fabled quality of this poem-very inventive.

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Malini Kadir 24 January 2008

when the clouds are this expressive.... The pen is gifted

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