Sunday, March 26, 2006

Communication Comments

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Communication Breakdown,
What’s happening today?
We don’t say what we mean,
And we don’t mean what we say.
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Aisha Sherazi
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Rk verma 22 September 2022

Wall please depend on this things so let not so behind tell poetic device in this stanza

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Rk verma 22 September 2022

Which poetic device is used here

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Rose wonder 26 October 2021

Nice poem Aisha

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Barbie 27 February 2018

Too long! Too long! Too long! Too long! Too long! Too long! Too long! Too long!

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Crisanto Daing 11 April 2016

Hello, Maam Aisha. I enjoyed reading your poem on communication and found it very interesting. I would like to use your poem as my material in the book I am presently writing. I am anticipating for your optimistic response to this humble request. Thank you so much! Crisanto A. Daing, MAEd. Instructor, Philippines

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 12 May 2014

Amazing write with such great lines to enjoy!

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Brian Dorn 03 September 2006

Great ending, Aisha. We've come to depend more and more on having technology do our communicating for us, it really has become uncivilized. Great write... very purposeful. Brian

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Tim Casswell 01 July 2006

I like the rhymes they are strong like a song lyric and yet they don't strain. the language is natural and appear to just happen to rhyme. Tim

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aeda sea 29 March 2006

this is all very true. a good poem all around!

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