M.J. Lemon

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Friday, September 9, 2022

Commonwealth Comments

Rating: ★5.0

A brown girl and a white boy
went on a date and gave
their finely shaped tongues
the permission to slither
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M.J. Lemon

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Susan Williams 23 February 2023

It challenges your readers to see what is in front of us but has gone undetected. Sprinkling a million stars on this

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Susan Williams 23 February 2023

Don't understand why I haven't seen this gem before... but I am certainly glad I saw it now. It gives raw meat for the heart and mind to chew on.

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M.J. Lemon 28 February 2023

Thank you so much, Susan. And as long as you aren't at the Chateau...

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Richard Wlodarski 03 November 2022

I can see the debauchery at both ends!

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M.J. Lemon 08 November 2022

And it's there in the middle! Thanks so much, Richard.

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Smoky Hoss 23 September 2022

Superb. Depth and simplicity blended deeply within the soul of the matter. Brilliant.

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M.J. Lemon 29 September 2022

Thank you! Much appreciated.

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Richard Wlodarski 09 September 2022

M.J., you've got me tongue-tied on this one! Definitely, a brilliant poem! Love it!

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M.J. Lemon 09 September 2022

Many thanks, Richard. And apologies for the tying...

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