Wednesday, June 9, 2010

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Death and it`s definitive end,
The closing down of love and pain.
I dream of this unfocused mend,
A release of an undeserving bane.
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Brandi Guthrie
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Kimberly Hilliker 07 November 2010

Well written poem about a horrific state. Keep on keeping on, Brandi. Find help for yourself, so life isn't so painful. Read my poem 'Unanswered Cry, ' you might appreciate the content. It's a plea for help too. Best of luck to you!

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