Wednesday, September 10, 2008

Commitments Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart is driven and sure, black and white are clear.
There are things to be tended to, people to take care of.
Relations. Projects. Responsibility is wafting in my face like a bed scent.
Fantasies return, I'm talking to myself again, dreams are more wild.
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jolenish fiber
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Chitra - 19 September 2008

commitments...a charged up piece, goes to show your acumen, good one

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Howard Johnson 16 September 2008

Quite a racie piece, Jolenish, Excellent penning, Enjoyed every word.

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Jhonny Thermidor 13 September 2008

WOW! I just wonder how you feel when u were writing this brilliant piece.

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