Sunday, September 2, 2012

Commitment Of Guilt Comments

Rating: 4.0

This is my diary, of what I'd done,
A moment of sorry, for this one,
Mistake I'd to learn, the whole in a story;
leaving you alone, in a city of no ivory,
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Alexander Coppedge 23 March 2013

Definately emotional A good story. You have a lot of wonderful lines The way you express some of them magical This art does need work to make it sparkle You got good taste And a lot of talent

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