Thursday, February 7, 2013

Commitment Comments

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Your eyes committed.
Your hair, the sun shine on them committed.
The gentle movement of your bosom as you breathed,
Committed.
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Hardik Vaidya
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Hardik Vaidya 08 February 2013

Thank you Dave walker, you made my life.

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Dave Walker 07 February 2013

A great poem, like it, a great write.

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Hardik Vaidya

Hardik Vaidya

Mahuva, Gujarat, India.
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