Thursday, November 3, 2011

Commitment Comments

Rating: 5.0

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Never is there love,
Unless there is an inner faith
For faith admits our pain
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Kevin Patrick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 July 2019

A poem of great depth. Powerful write imbued with wisdom and insight. ''Our commitment will reward the true golden years." A beautiful line from a great poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 08 December 2016

Kevin, continue your commitment to writing poetry. You are doing great!

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Walterrean Salley 12 May 2012

Marriage, business, etc. - commitment is what holds it together. Even hope is spawned from true commitment. And anything without commitment, falls apart. Thank you, Kevin, for this beautiful and interesting piece.

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Eric Cockrell 06 March 2012

love, a journey taken by two, along a path that winds up and down, and is beset by many storms... that exposes the true self in its very risk. good poem!

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 06 March 2012

This is a gud poem...it really touch the core of true love....which is eternally the same...and faithful....i luv the theme...anf the writeup.....keep it up...+

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Besa Dede 02 March 2012

Kevin, this is a very meaningful poem, with a powerful message! ! it is so true that we learn through pain and through acknowledgement of it! I am truly moved! Thank you for sharing! !

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Romeo Della Valle 03 November 2011

Wow! Kevin! What a powerful, deep and thought provoking write that clearly shows your great poetic talent! I love the richness of imagery and fine texture of this impressive write! 10+++ Well deserved! Keep on writing my man! You got what it takes in the Poetry World: TALENT! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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