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good commitment to your imagination...but, not that much to your language...

one who is committed cannot be a poet!

yeahhh trinity im commited to read your works.it's great man, just great. take care.

This is what MAY be called creative writing! It is a GREAT read. The theme is well woven with mastery on words. Keep it up.... you did well. An ordinary poet would have got deviated from the theme by the end - but you did well.

my life your life cosmos these milkyway this milkyway.that..........we commit committed us i wish you wish a life commited to myself, , , , , yourself, , the great philosophy of real mind with milkystars