Commercialised Consciousness Comments
A montage of atrocities
Juxtaposed with toothpaste commercials.
The ghost of the perfect product;
That diverts our minds from the real.
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A well composed poem..... Truly exceptional....5 stars*****
Great poem. The herd mentality. Because every ones is doing it we do it. What happened to science maths cakculus. Calculate.
Thanks guys..much appreciated! Yes indeed Deuke, the herd mentality ensures that capitalism keeps on prospering throughout our wanton world.
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8/23/2025 6:03:07 PM # 1.0.0
Dominic your poem and its last two lines really deliver the poetic commercial goods. It can be a crass world out there sometimes and even on this site readers and members are bombarded by it, even 20 seconds into a poem. Ah well, c'est la vie we've just got to learn to live with it. Excellent modern poem and five non bling bling stars. Take care and hang in there.