Accurately expressed sentiments, very nice poem.
But remember this, you are not alone, we will all be part of the past, but the important thing to ask is did we live according to our own terms and not according to some other's dictates?
Please keep on writing, you enliven Poem Hunter.com by your presence.......
Two of my best poetry fans and mentors passed away in sleep but I don't weep
glory and gory have short lives only
I too will a part of history be soonly fadingly
till such time Abide with me...
deep poem with easy language.....
I too will a part of history be soonly...
Nice philosophical musing after someone's birthday and passing away of two close friends of the poet. I appreciate this poem because it emits positivity which provides moral strength to the reader. Thanks
KINDNESS ALL OF YOU OF P H...
So is the life, additions and substractions are part of this life. We may or may not be there tommorrow our poems will remain.
So sorry for your loss. Someday we will too fade away into oblivion. Till that time let us enjoy writing and reading. Nice write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A touchy poem, I am sure many of us will leave a legacy which will be carried by the next generation.