Comment... My Purpose Is Served Poem by me poet yeps poet

Comment... My Purpose Is Served

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I sent a few messages
to friends like you
as I wanted all to participate
in reading and commenting too

so many just say
and send me messages
READ me
then simply forget to even thank

That is what I consider blasphemous! ! !
SAD and sorry poets.
All need a pat on the back
so that the fountain continues to flow
all poets desire it
and know also
but often ignore
the basic courtesies.
So some comments I have given
I place before all of you
hope you will comment similarly too


And I am pleased
O poet to get a fair comment
from you
will go just now to your page
to read you
Thanks to you

I wished not to fool
any one
what a Canadian one like you


You indeed ma'am
are so thoughtful and kind
such a lovely comment
you have in mind
hope you will savour more honey
from your Honey

When you went abroad
you did make friends
it seems
another day another time
another moon soon will be
with both her and thee
take it easy
she has gone with the wind!
Now find another one

...and soon go
all poets here
we must each other know

More okay

You do well to involve your entire family
in pitter patter
but if it's summer rain
all enjoy it mostly
how does it matter
as long as it falls pitter patter
but if it's winter
my get inside your razai/(quilt)
let others look after themselves
you look after your
mom and pop
old no!

Kindness
poets are poets only
what is there in a name
enjoy poetry and comment please

I had selected a minuscule few
you feel happy to be one Sir.

Yes I am a ROMANTIC POET mostly
Glad you liked my poetry
Thank you so sweet and kind of you
Now dance will you

Sunday, October 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 08 November 2019

I support your views nicely conveyed through a nice poem

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Bill Cantrell 02 October 2017

My friend, basic courtesies should not be ignored, you are correct, the way you present this is both poetic and correct, it amazes me the number of ones that message us to read their poems and comment without ever reading anything of ours, and when we do read and comment our purpose is served in their eyes

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 October 2017

thank u 4 d support today they nearly sacked me I couldn't reach my page for the whole day

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